 |
 |
医学医药论文英文摘要中的常见错例分析
１、医药科技工作者撰写医药论文时一般要求附英文摘要，英文摘要写得准确与否，很大程度上体现了作者的学术水平，也与论文的影响力有很大关系。我们有幸从《医药导报》杂志社获取了相当数量论文的英文摘要原稿。该刊特邀英文校译——同华中科技大学同济医学院冯新为教授，年逾九旬仍伏案笔耕，为这些稿件做了大量细致深入的校译工作，可谓句句汗水字字珠玑。给医药科技论文英文摘要的写作提供了一个范本，对广大医药科技工作者来说也是一次极其珍贵的学习机会。本刊特辑录刊载其原文及冯教授所作修正、点评，以飨读者。
2、编制体例：本文按照原文、修正、点评次序编写；修改、插入处以黑体斜体，删节处附括号说明，如有点评附上标数字注明。
1、 原文：
Determination of Gallic Acid in Zhixueting Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1' XU La-ying2 (1. Department of Pharmacology' Tongji Medical College' Huazhong University of Science and Technology' Wuhan 430030' China; 2.The Faculty of Pharmacy' Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine' Wuhan 430061'China)ABSTRACT Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Zhixueting liquids. Methods: Zhixueting liquids were dissolved by distilled water' and then extracted into the sample with butanal etc. The samples were determinated by TLC scanning (λS=280nm'λR=350nm). Result: The average recovery rate was 96.36% and RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 five batches of samples were 0.38'0.42 and 0.47mg/ml. Conclusion: The method is simple' convenient and available.KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Zhixueting liquids; Determination; Gallic acid修正：Determination of Gallic Acid in Chuxueting1 oral Liquids by TLC ScanningZHOU Qun1' XU La-ying2 (1. School of Pharmacy2' Tongji Medical College' Huazhong University of Science and Technology' Wuhan 430030' China;
2.The Faculty of Pharmacy' Hubei College of Traditional Chinese Medicine' Wuhan 30061'China)Abstract Objective: To determine the content of gallic acid in Chuxueting oral Liquids. Methods: The Chuxueting oral Liquid was dissolved in distilled water' and then xtracted （into the sample删去) with water-saturaled n-butanol3 etc. for the preparation of samples. The samples were subjected to gallic acid determination by TLC scanning λS=280nm'λR=350nm). Results: The average rate of recovery was 96.36%'（and删去)RSD=2.39%. The contents of gallic acid in 3 （five删去) batches of samples were 0.38'0.42 and 0.47mg/ml respectively. Conclusion: The method is simple' convenient and feasible.
KEY WORDS TLC Scanning; Chuxueting oral Liquids; Determination; Gallic acid
